Comic Panel Experiment

Yyyyyyyup so I'm revisiting my idea of wanting to make a comic.

I'll make a journal soon about what's going to be changed (there's quite a bit), but for now I just wanted to show you guys what I'm thinking about for my comic "style."

The biggest problem for me has been backgrounds. If I'm being completely honest, I suck at painting backgrounds. So hard. So I decided to try a different approach and do "lined" backgrounds. So far, I like where it's headed. This is just a test to see how lined backgrounds look for me, and I like that it's very comic-y looking. So I'll probably end up using this style for comic backgrounds.

Also, I think the comic is going to feature many species, not just lions, but wolves as well and probably other animals too. I think it'll add some diversity to the story. This is going to be one of my main characters, and she's tentatively named Ariadne or "Ria." Her design is not final, but I like it so far. She'll probably end up being mute as well.

Anyway.... I'll try and organize my thoughts into a coherent journal, but for how here's a rough idea of what comic panels will look like. Yay? Nay?

I'd love to hear some feedback, so PLEASE tell me what you like and don't like!
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